Just call me your Savior
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To bring down, spit on, and stab in the back with a knife
u may want to change this line it didn't fit i don't think but tha rest flowed decently, it was basic wit wordplay but i don't care much for that, work on tha ending, that's suppose to be tha strongest part of a rap, tha thing that says "NOW WAT!"
good though, it was aight
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