A fairly original approach.

I don't quite know how it relates to Citizen Kane. I watched it once, and i can't remember much of it.

Maybe you're comparing the death of your father to when Citizen Kane's political empire begun collapsing?

Either way, the imagery and sharp use of of some words was evoking. The way you fitted it into the structure made was on and off. I felt at times you didn't let them go hand in hand as much as you could've. Nonetheless, strong use of vocab and overlal imagery brought this piece 'home'. Yes, i think the vocab was used relatively well. It stayed on par with how the piece was layed/set out...

I actually like how you got into the almost desperate emotions of a man who has turned cynical. Cynical and closed off in many aspects due to the fact he has lost someone. And he doesn't want to go there again. So he deals with it in a fairly cold fashion.

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