aight. Xecution. Your flow was choppy..the ryme scheme.
but vocab was good. the punches were aight too, could
have been written better tho. Your punches seemed Hard,
but the fact that they were choppy made the me lose the Flow/
Rythim Alot. Nothing really stood out, except for the Hercules Line
and the last liitle part you had...

i bring-flavor,lyrical human being-craver,battlen me couldnt be-braver/
if you thinkin of killen me in this battle, check ya self kid cause thats some dangerous behavior/

^^^that was sick..even tho it was plain.

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Rappad..a few of your punches stood out. i liked them.

I'll murder you now, name-the-spot cuz i easily manipulate ill-legal like racist cops//
You have the fakest-drops and you get ate-a-lot so dining on your verse will be the only time I taste a loss//

that was nice..funny at the end..

I'm slappin this hoe with blows causing damaging hits//
Make him "kick a bucket" like when a janitor trips//

i liked that too. Never heard that one before. lol..

We playing dykes while X hoping to get his name in lights//
But we all know he "pre-writes", like ancient times//

...that was your choppiest line. this could have been a aight lil thing. but the ryme scheme is fucked up.

Overall, i think x had better creativity but not as good flow.
rappad's verse had some lines that stood out more in a BATTLE

vote=rappad..
sorry i cant POLL vote, but i aint a NEWB.



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