aight. XL, your verse was ok. It seemed really simple.
if your punches were harder it wouldnt matter if your
verse a little simple. your verse was ok, but it didnt have
anyhitng that stood out ta me. plus i didnt like your ryme schem.
Anamiss Jones..
you said "YOU" too much. it got annoying. but your
punches were a stronger then the other kids.
U punches out of sync like Rosanne crip walkin and harlem shakin/
By the way, 1 question bout ur verse: WHAT THE FUCK WERE U THINKIN?!?!?!?!/
your only good written, good flowin line. in my opinion..
over-all this was a good battle...
vote=A. Jones
sorry i cant POLL vote yet, but i aint a NEWB.
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