DAMNIT I LOVE IT
this is my kind of open mic... now to disect

It's not for me, Ur not stoppin me from playin' monopoly

loved the line... all your internal rhymes were great, u probably averaged 4 rhymes per line (im guessing) which is good by my book. The approach was nice, and you handled it well. it felt like you were over the phone talking to me about it...

part 2

i didnt totally get what you were saying. the approach seemed like a parent giving his child a speech... MeN being the child (that makes this whole thing all the better) the ending was great

But, believe it, my audience. . Realize that the sun shines forever

i think im gonna cry

10/10, do it again