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Old 08-29-03, 04:16 AM   #4
Dr.SeusS
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aight. skylock, your verse was boring. your punches were ok, but nothing stood out...nothing hit hard. your flow was a little off too..

ay BITCH! where the fuck that come from? wasn't from your mind,
if you meant for that shit to be a joke you forgot about the punchline//


this is the Only Line I liked..^^

you're so small i could roll you into a small human ball,
pinch your blood out - freeze it and use it for my paintball gun to paint parents wall//


that was Clever, but you ended it like it wasn't directed towards your Opponent.(paint parents wall....or paint your parents wall...???i dont know..)
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BrainSurgeon. your flow was aight. The ryme Scheme i mean.
not alotta people on r.b dont know what a good verse is..when
coming to that...your punches were ok...you had half your verse standing out, either from creativity to a Decent punch...i could tell
you got lazy near the end and little parts in the middle tho...

over-all...
vote-brainsurgeon...
sorry i cant POLL vote yet. But i aint a NEWB.


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