Hmm, both of your flows were Choppy. The ryme scheme wasnt too good. but 24 Karat..you tried alotta wrodplay, some hit good some really didnt...but allmost every line you attempted to do that. Your punches were ok, but they weren't really personals or anything that stood out to me. you have a phat avy tho..lol


rapid, your flow had a little better flow. But the ryme scheme wasnt that good. in my opinion.
you had a few lines that were funny...

im the lyrical god now niggas come a "praise me" like an hour hand on the clock this nigga gets droped twice "daily"/

and...

holy shit dawg this nigga be "hopeless" he could smoke a pound of pot take a blood sample this bitch still "dopeless"nigga just aighnt right..like if the roman catholics where "popeless"/


those were your best lines...
close battle, but this one goes to Rapid..
sorry i cant POLL vote yet, but i aint a NEWB.