iight

thats how most of my stuff comes out, right off the top of my head, straight from the heart, from pen to paper, not really thinking, then go back over it after, adding more into the emotion so on

man this was sad, but we hear it alot, it seems now a days alot of ppl dont see how bad they hurt ppl by cheating. but you still got me thinking, and you got emotions across strong,

it was simple and kept to point, all and all i liked it, could have up the vocab some thou, keep postin

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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