^*wonders what she edited*...

A powerful full on vent. Which didn't ignore the depths of your anger and problems. Some parts of course were so personal that it's up to the reader to work out "what's he talking about with that?"...

Overall, you came with a strong vent. Letting your emotions drop onto paper. No real critique. Though some links were loose. It didn't matter. As it's a vent. Some might say that adds to the effect even.

...resp....

EDIT: Oh alright, i see. Thought it was something more juicy than that. Gah!

Bouncy's piece was mucho betteros (er..)...agreed. Very nice.