To quit, FUCK! SHIT! And Im always wonderin' why it's rainin
Got no job, education, or trainin', Parents always complain

aint that the truth...feeling it fellas...you both portrayed your
thought's very well, strong writers voice throughout the piece..
also mentills heavy use of internals added a little kick to his
rhyme scheme, ill flow....G hod came solid on every aspect of his
verse...much props.