This wasn't as good as the other, experiences, it was a mix of an angry confusion, but it seemed more like a rap than poetry...
There's a level of emotion, something that makes words hazy, and that makes a poem...

I liked the quickfire lines, straight to tha point, and the repetition of 'niggaz' it showed, in my eyes, an angered and generalized feel, i liked the stereotyping caused by your worries...

You simply needed more heart in this, i liked the idea but there wasn't too much of a grabbing conclusion...

An elevated peice, not as good as experiences, but kep droppin ,and about other things, rather than jus love and relationships...