Lightly atmospheric. But if one digs into it. They get heavier atmosphere.

It was short. But compressed in a manner which was kind of loose yet everything there to make it a solid and strong piece.

Using as few words as possible to bring forth a meaning is something hard to do. For a quick read, which makes one think a bit, this is a very good piece.

The meaning i got out of it? A man looking at the world, and with everything he sees (dies, lives-apologises-hits...etc. etc.), he moves one step closer to enlightenement. And then he gets there with that fairly profound three line stanza.

I guess the ending was that now he/she just carries on watching and waits. For now he/she knows what he/she's looking for. Hmmm...that brings with it more than one effect. Cos an outsider would think he's doing nothing but waht he was doing before..

..Anyway, i enjoyed this. I enjoy pieces of this nature. Of this 'kind'.

EDIT: But saying that, i must also give some critique. Some of the
things you 'saw' could've maybe been a bit more striking and profound. Only a bit, as too much would've lost the effect of the piece....
...resp...