it started off good like:

"I burnt the bridges, golden hopes revoked my old devotion
now prone and hopeless, out of focus w/ my own emotions."

thats good word play, i like that type of rhyme sceam. but when i started reading more it fell off, not in the sence that it got weak but it didnt get better, it more or less just stayed the same.

the second verse......something about wind lashing on a bridge, then:

"An eternal struggle, my journey for my promised land begun..
I cannot run, but only take my awaited problems as they come"

thats iight but corny at the same time. then there was something about gods and it being dark with demons, then to cash, then evil......i dunno, i droped tha blunt an burnt myself, after that i lost track of where i was and went to the next verse.

1 of my favorite mc's is "Kool G Rap" i love his rhymeing style, so i liked this verse the most out the whole thing:

"I think I'm the best, I'm being humble, yes
A bless with my text until I corrupted the net"

i was feelin this 2:
"Used to get high enough to jump off the sun and dunk"

hahahaha.............L's an blunts stays geekt. all out, i feel that the 3rd verse had the best medophores, an ended it nicely.

even tho i aint feel deep shits an this was deep shits, this was "good", and its an iight collabo.

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