you got a good concept goin, but your beats have no rhythm.

If your beats were actually on beat, they wouldn't be too bad.

Its just sounds like you put the snare and the kick in random places. And you samples are off beat.


Try gettin some sort of pattern with the drums. you wanna make a beat that will make peeps nod their heads, not shake em.

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