Shiznit's Thoughts:


Surely a very inspiring piece.

THe terms flowed through the whole piece evenly. The one thing that ive noticed is how the way uve constructed this. THe Rhyme Scheme often showed how well youve compiled it so that it would fit over all. Youve started with a swept away intro. The you rhymed through with it. THen as i read further down. The Rhyme Scheme changed...not in a bad way but in somewhat confusing that affected the flow of it but not entirely.

THe content was very much emotional. Expanded creativeness is what uve expressed.

Its good.

Rhetorical Insights Week VII is up. Drop one in there if you have time. THanks!

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