Shiznit's Thoughts:


Sometimes saying 'Sorry' too many times immunizes that one person you were saying them to. But in all due times, you mean them altogether that actually responded with such guilt to what uve done. Apologies can be accepted depending on the cause. Just make sure the next time you say sorry..you actually mean it.

Your repitition somewhat supported everything with intact emotions flowed through with it. Nothing to critique about anything on this because its just the way you wrote it that expressed the point entirely.

AngellicalR ...Edgar Allan Poe stuff are pretty intense ..maybe you kinda felt it with the whole repetition thing similarities goin on.

Nothing more to say. Nice and simple poem.

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