Thread: tha game
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Old 08-30-03, 02:35 AM   #4
prophiit
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Originally posted by Ls an blunts
ill shits, if i quoted something id be repeating the whole thing. sick how u went to 10 an back.

"6 shotz out-a glock, leaves still one breathin/
so i use a 7-foot javilin and knock 8 of his teeth in/"



^ agreed this is the best line in the verse.....dope concept and well done, the flow was on point for the most part the vocab was basic but you managed to tell a story using the concept and not just spouting nonsensical crap to make the concept work 8/10 very good piece!!!!!!!!!!!
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