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Atra Ludio or Hip-Hop?
From: Cottage Grove, Oregon |
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IP:
It started out strange. A juxtoposition of good and bad. Line two talks about strawberry fields. Strawberry fields are a good thing. Line three talks about beating each other down. Beating aint a cool thing. And yet you mixed those two things and it worked. It's kooky, like summmer soup.
But I was really feeling the last two paragraphs the most. Those I really felt. It's like here two people are, standing right next to each other. Entirely mute, so close to touching. And then they just drift away without saying a word. It's saddening, yet enlightening and good.
Good because there were two people there and they were connected and even when they were apart they had something non-corperal holding each other together. That's more than a lot of folks have. Dunno if you ment it or not, but you managed to keep a juxtoposition of good and bad of a different sort at the end.
~Shalom~
BTW, Love your new avatar. From what I can see it reminds me of something Boris Vallejo would've painted.
*Wonders if you've been looking at the same pornogrophy*
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