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Originally posted by shiznit
Shiznit's Thoughts:
Very creatively done.
Refined terms such as what u have chosen to be constructed in this piece were quite unique.
The acrostic part made everything simple yet brilliant. The fact that you were in Europe and it seems that youve used the place as an inspiration attached the main idea that you were stressing to submit.
The wordplay were simple because youve just accompanied them with quite words artistically.
The title fitted really well. Made me think of the song "closing time" by semisonic. but it was good.
Rhetorical Insights VI is up so what you waiting for?..Drop one.
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