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Originally posted by varentao
Hmmm...
Searching through the eternity of a circle...
You put on display some very evoking and gritty imagery. Gritty in the writer sense.
Bringing forth an essence which allows the piece to be easily relatable in varied ways. Yet still, not all that accessible. You have to dig each time. To get a true feeling of the piece.
Though i also felt at times it was akward. Over elaborating in some parts. Though the overall feel of the piece covered it up nicely. Overall, it was a very good read. If you wrote this whilst in writers block, though i can see certain hints that show you did. Overall, it was well written.
(really liked the circle thing...especially how you started and ended it..executed very nicely..)...
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