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Originally posted by prophiit
wow the flow in this was off the hook. now what i'm about to say is a compliment, it had a nursery rhyme type flow to it. beautiful because the rhyme scheme is so simple. the subject matter has me puzzled what you actually mean is most likely far off of what this makes me feel. i think it's about the hopelessness of being trapped into a routine. of being so stuck in your ways that you cannot break away from them even if you wanted to. excellent piece i would try and write for rhetorical insights if i were you i look foward to your future work. 1
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