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Originally posted by prophiit
what did I ever do to deserve this
I never did nothin to no one to have shit returnith
^^^ Way to Shakesperean never read any of your other shit so I can't say if you've elevated this piece wasn't bad though I've seen worse if I were you I'd work on your structure though theres some problem trying to catch your flow I'd even out your lines.....6/10
not bad
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