Deadly alliance seems to agree with everyone, not that i mind if he agree's wit me

Regardin Shiznit's remark: 'somewhat confusing that affected the flow of it but not entirely.'

There is never anything wrong with a poem, all of it is there for a subconcsious reason so long as it's written from the heart, and not insincere...
This confusing flow showed that you weren't completely sure about new discoveries, but the change showed a change in you, very advanced...advanced yet amateurish....I think i'm confused!!!