I liked this poem... full of emotions, expressing a longing to be whole again or sumthing like that.
You could elevate on your vocab, no hate intended though.
Your message came across very well. This was an overall nice read, inspiring too, it made me think with your last line.
Nice piece, keep droppin.

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VARENTAO: CLOSED at the request of Eternal Evidence. (Has nothing to do with your post SPlit Eyez, but yours was the last post. And didn't want to up the piece like i did the last one).