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Honestly, Some parts of this shit were pretty good...You seem to know about internals:
"still i'm ready to drop a rhyme like murder ain't a crime"
And These 2 bars:
"I rhyme with diction, and this ain't fiction i'm dipictin'
So don't be so quick to be dismissin', the words that I'm spittin'
I know you feel this shit despite it bein' written" - Were Dope!
It Kind of fell off towards the end, but what i pointed out shows a shit load of potential, ev
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