Blah At Varen Getting Slept On. .


This was good for what it was, stuck to the topic in an abstract yet effective way i felt. I agree that this was more 'poetic' than open mic material, but the content was strong, dominative writers voice and word choice became pretty effective, helped it to flow at times when the bar lengths seemed stretched. First verse was my personal favourite, although, i liked the final line, that rounded it off pretty nicely. Very aesop-rockesque structure in my opinion, but it wasnt a bad piece.

Nice One My Man : )