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Old 08-30-03, 05:27 PM   #14
Tha Griot
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"a meta4 plus meta4 means in 2 lines you get 8-(ate)"

"im ahead of my time so if you herd this before that means you copped this to~late-"

nice..

yo if you worked on this ryme a bit more man this wuld have been mad tight but it seems like you are jus fucken lazy to up ya vocab and shit...use the threasure ma nigga ight and change some words and shit...work on em lines ova and ova again dont jus post...but from that i can tell you got mad skill..

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