Very impressive Preach....
You certainly have come along way since I was last
on here reading your work...and I'm loving this new style
that you seem to be using....I would like to read more tho..
so quit posting only one every couple of weeks
This always seemed to hold you on the edge..then keep
you there...failing to draw you in too deep so you lose
all forms of suspence...which was really well done..I'm not
sure if u did that on purpose or not....
And your vocab was nicely thought out...you brought out
alot of emotion with your word choices alone...
nice piece