oh sweetie you lost me a little in this one....
The impression that I got is that you have lost something
or someone that maybe inspired you?
Or perhaps you have simply lost inspiration itself? nothing
physically...just mentally you have nothing to write about....
no ideas? thoughts?
That is the general idea I was given when I was reading this....
This isn't like your usual style..and considering the block that is completly understandable...But Var I'm not in a hurry to call this piece bad or lacking even, cause even tho it was different and almost simple in style compared to your work...I still enjoyed it..and if my interpretation is correct it makes sense....but if i'm on the wrong path .lawrd help me....

Keep expressing hun, even tho you may not want to at times