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From: BELLSIDE...THATS ALL YOU NEED TO KNOW MOTHER FUCKER!!...~OrIgInAl~RaPbAtTlE~ |
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*puts his lotion away*
well...ehem..lol...yea i feel ya on the blockage homie...n ive neva seen it put into poetry form...this was nice...word...i had to read it twice though...lol..then i looked at the title n got it!..hahahha...but yea
i liked this shit a lot
Thinking each touch
To feel each thought
Pacing souls together
Through naked motions...
The rub of raw love..
Kiss of surrender
Take us above...
yea man....i understood ery concept ya portreyed through this...ya flow was sketchy...but im sure wasnt your main focus...but you came through mos def...
igido
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RN Vs RB WAR!!....yr 2000...vet~~YEA I SAID VET!! WHAT YOU WANT ME TO PROVE IT? STEP THEN YOU FUCKING HOMO'S
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