As I wipe the sleep from my eyes, it’s just another day that feels like this
yet another day sailed with life’s bitter kiss


the line wasnt the best of openers.....day seems to be repetitive...i feel with your skill you coulda worded that a lot better...


well...all and all...i dont really like the poem....it is your emotions i can see...but the delievery of it all just seemed plain and dull... im sorry you had to deal wit ya boi cheatin on you though...i hope you work ya problems out..

igido

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RN Vs RB WAR!!....yr 2000...vet~~YEA I SAID VET!! WHAT YOU WANT ME TO PROVE IT? STEP THEN YOU FUCKING HOMO'S