I aint in the rap game to try and proclaim fame,
i'm just a newly sparked flame without a known name/
The other stars want fast cars and to be hot as mars,
that aint me, i'm just wantin to keep from behind bars/
I work full-time to perfect my unflawed rhymes,
it gets me nowhere, maybe if i had a rap sheet full of crimes/
I'm unknown so I get postponed and eventually overthrown,
even though I'm in the zone, I'm all alone, I'm on my own/
Can't no one see I'm just an emcee with a demo cd,
nothin's to guarantee, i got the lock but a broken key/
I write to express my insight but the pain continues to reignite/
It's a constant fight against what's right that causes all this incite/



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