first guys delivery was off on the hook......but your delivery was good on your verse.....lyric wise, your verse was iight too me, nuttin really catchy from it, cuz other than people tryin to sound like em these days its hard to here sumtin original now.....hook is ok, wasnt feelin it....kinda played out to me....second guy was ok, lyrics were heh......third guy was to pick up the tone in his voice and work on his delivery.....4th guy had me rollin on the floor....lol...he made this song HOT..........SIKE....the best thing was when he finished and started talkin in english...lol....overall, this track was like a 5/10 to me......just my opinion......and to the first guy, you gotta work on pronouncing your words more clearly, cuz its like you step on your own words sumtimes you know what i mean.....but just keep doin your thing, to all of you.....OnE








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