twin it sounds like guess who is back that bootleg style cd out in the stores.i believe you aint think to steel it but hey.......yo the song does lack a lil but that is depending on how you pattern to be for a club peace this will do but for a track to reach heads this will fall short.
you had some decent ass ideas but you troject it different isten to your favorite m.c. then read this see then if it meets your expectation im sure you will see ways to fix it and make it better....
stay up and do you