Yeah, I actually could feel the despairaging emotions in this peice, I just felt they were not properly emancipated.

I mean, I just felt like you were writing certain words in for the sake of having that specific rhyme scheme or something rather than what you were actually feeling in your heart.

But still, it's good stuff.

~Shalom~

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.