I know exactly what I want to say in reply to this peice. Except I don't. I know one thing I wanna say, but I don't know the rest. Most of the rest is just technicle. Anyway, I'm confusing enough as it is so I'll just say it.

I loved this peice.

I really did. I mean, there were technicle stuff and poetic stuff about it that I loved. Like, despite the lack of a rhyme scheme it still flowed and manuevered beautifully. It was like a flashflood of words in the proverbial canyon that is poetry. Even certain words at points might not of seemed to of fit in, but they fit like a jigsaw puzzle. And the entire concept of being so close with another person and living a perfect life is so foreign to someone like me, yet you make it seem like it is such a possibility.

This is just some damn good, and heartwarming, material.

~Shalom~

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.