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it seems both a poem and an attempted topical...cuz of ya rhyme scheme(you had a few multi's) i liked the imagination you put in here...well thought indeed....but i questioned the use of somma ya vocab....you may have used some words incorrectly brah n made ya shit sound kinda funny....but all in all this was niceness
igido
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RN Vs RB WAR!!....yr 2000...vet~~YEA I SAID VET!! WHAT YOU WANT ME TO PROVE IT? STEP THEN YOU FUCKING HOMO'S
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