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Old 08-31-03, 12:27 PM   #8
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it seems both a poem and an attempted topical...cuz of ya rhyme scheme(you had a few multi's) i liked the imagination you put in here...well thought indeed....but i questioned the use of somma ya vocab....you may have used some words incorrectly brah n made ya shit sound kinda funny....but all in all this was niceness


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