Started off kind of basic and akward. That will put a few people off.

But you went on and wrote with a simplicity that kept the power at a constant level. Not too strong, but not weak either. Just there.

You kept focused throughout the piece on the topic at hand. Not straying all that much.

It held strong and well overall. The slight personal touch (though at times it was here and there) and hints of depth of lines made it a nice piece for what it was.

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