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Old 08-31-03, 03:26 PM   #2
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decent
if its audio u'd need to shorten the bars alot for flows purpose
seemed some vocab was used just for the big words maybe not..
flow was shaky in parts due to the length of lines but was decent in other spots
content was reasonably interestng..i read it all..
hook was decent
simple verse but overall give it a 7/10
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