Spelling was a bit off at times, i though for a piece of this kind. And a piece that in a sense seems so complete. You could've gone over it a bit. Made it easier for the reader.

Nonetheless, imagery was the most striking thing in this. Beautiful, graphic, intense...

The meanings i got out of this were mixed. But it's a piece that doesn't necessarily need to have a meaning that stands out.

One was the constant yearning for power that plagues humanity. And therefore, plagues the earth. For instance, the one between two nations. Like India and Pakistan fighting over Kashmir. It goes way beyond the whole 'justice' thing. They ignore the beauty of Kashmir, and the rights of it's people. Destroying it and it's people.

There's also the one of maybe two brothers or friends. Rivals below the frail cover of their friendship. Ignoring the bigger picture and what they achieve. Of their ever growing rivalry.

There's one more wich stands out. The fiery, consistently inconsistent relationship between two lovers. But i wont go into that.

Overall, i felt the meaning was a bit here and there. Maybe cos you hid it so well under the dence imagery and what not.

At first glance one might say you over crowded certain lines. Elaborating a bit too much at times,. But then once you dig into it, you can realise it's actually fitted in nicely.

This was a piece ridden with vivid and varying imagery. That was the focal point of the piece. The core of it. And you executed it well (put it together well).

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By the way. Typical girl. Your masquera is running...