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Old 08-31-03, 06:05 PM   #10
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Time to "merk" meks winning for him is lost "dreams".
Slapped this Fag "Ass Backwords" plan hell you need Hella "SKEM's"~/~
1st lines was good opener... 2nd had good idea. couldda been carried out differently but nice opener

detach fags i'm just takin meks out the game of raps....
this kids coughin up "blood" like lesbians on their Rags~/~
LOLL good shit hell yeah lol.. reminds me of my "pointless .. like dykes with dildo's" line.. good

Meks Blessed ya chest swoll like i'm examinin ya Cortex...
deploy hex your lackin the WINS you only suck half in "TEXT"~/~
didnt quite understand it... showed good vocab & wordplay... aight flow.. was okk cudda been better if i got it lol

thats six line i'm merkin this cat with no Noteable wins....
you beating SIN is like old folks on toilets...your chances DEPENDS~/~
lol good punch.. nuff said

this kids fag man handlin would be PLEASURE to this Gay....
add another loss bitch this battle will end before today~/~
[/b]this i thought u shud change... its a finisher .. ts meant2 leave me like "!!!!!woooo" lol and this didnt...[/b]

good shit... overall 7/10


Meks


You think u tough wanna stand up to a vet, i bet, u'll stagger at best, get left witta dagger in yer chest, think u can go from rags to tha best? From where you at a Cinderella Story couldn't even be dreamt//1bar
good flow.. good opener but the dreamt shit didnt rhyme.. maybe with a different accent but to me nope! good opener tho

Trippin on sum ficticious shit against me is tha simplest risk, i'm slippin his disk, flippin his script, just plain rippin his shit, try'ta maintain a grip on this shit, i'll fuckin burn ya hands till you sick'a dis shit//2bar
again yur flow was on pointttttt but u shud have added a diss 2 it and it would have been fireeeeee.. too bad

Like it or not-hot-likely you not, whatever i drop, spike it or not, ma punch light yer whole spot, egnite you in my bowl cuz i'm smokin you POt//3bar
flow wasnt as good.. still better than Syn's flow though... had a diss whhich was aight.. overall~ aightp

You straight cum wit weakness, jerkin round a bunch'a fags like Jackass in'a race like the preakness, re=place bones with nothing man I'll leave you cheek-less, recieve this, beatin, you couldnt win even if u was fuckin cheatin//4bar
you seem to always fall off near the end.. by cheek-less it was str8 hot.. but then cheatin was wack.. sorry but it was... nice shit up 2 cheek-less though!!!!!

I'm sick and tired of spittin quick and ma battle seee a "early retire", you can spit wit your Mic but it'll always have a "gurly wire", Shorely i know your for hire, Cuz Young MIk's Lookin For A new DIck-Ryder//5bars - 10 lines
that was a diss 2 young mik not syntext..

^^Man you have a goof low but NEED MORE DISSES

overall - 6/10

Vote - SYNTEXT

[b]AFTER I BREAKDOWN LIKE THAT.. TOOK ME 7 MINUTES CAN U RETURN THE FAVOUR? ITS THE LEAST U COULD DO!!!.. thanx man good battle you both got potential.

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