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Old 08-31-03, 07:30 PM   #5
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damn gotta love that posterboy beat. Jurassic harlem is a real tight beat fa sho.

1st mans wack. flows off and wasnt feelin the lyrics at all. there was a couple good lines.

the chorus is aight. need more emotion.

2nd guys a lot better. flow needs a little elevation and the flow could be tighter. the lyrics were decent.

you both sound like your rappin too quiet. try to project your vocals a little more on the next track. it'll help.

hit my shit up too when u get a chance:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=75775

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