Yeah, for a ten minute piece this was pretty good, flow was its strongpoint, although, sorry if this kind of destroys the whole theme / concept of the piece but using "Like" dosent make the lines wordplay, it makes them Similies because your comparing them to something else of a similar nature.

What Richochet did WAS Wordplay such as the "Demon-Straight" and "Rated 18" Lines, Conflicts Were Just Punches, And Quite Old Ones At That, I Remember using An Elevate / Bungalow Punch Back When I First Started In '00, Lol.

All In All, Not A Bad Effort, Flow Kept It Up Nicely, Internals Helped, Some Ok Woprdplay, Your Styles Complimented Each other Pretty Nicely, Not Bad My Young Protege's. .

Props.
Oh, And Reply To Mine: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...8232#post748232