This very nicely written piece. Or at least, a piece that reads very well (er..)..

The purity of emotions and imagery was easy to access. You didn't seem to stick to any kind of structure (or at the least not rigidly). Which gave it an extra edge of flow and poetic essence.

The message itslef was hard hitting. Though not in exacts, it was still relatable. Especially how you depicted the closeness between you and that person. Though perfection coming out of that is fleeting (from a personal standpoint).

Nothing else to say, but..

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