Strong Opening Line: "Crime is life and Sentence is death"
I Liked That A Lot, Really Helped Set The Tone For The Piece In My Opinion, Thugz Flow Was A Little Hard To Get Into At First For Me, The Pauses In His Bars Were Off, But It was Nothing Too Bad, Nice Usage Of Internal Rhyming And He Gave Off An Emotional Take Pretty Nicely, Seemed Heartfelt As I Read It,
The Hook Again Was Hard To Catch The Flow Of The First Time Round, The Style Seemed To Switch Drastically And It Threw Me, But I Re-Read And Caught It, Bash Dropping The Second Verse Was Dope, His Multi's Were Spot On, Flow Was There But He Seemed To Stretch The Lines Too Far, He Should Of Ended It At The Third Multi "art in a message" Then Carried On Into The Next Line, Flow Was There, I Dont Think I Found One Forced Multi In His Verse And Again, He Rounded The Piece Off Nicely Towards The End. Nice Collab, Made For A Good Read & Im Glad I Did Check This Now, Its Gay How People Like Us Get Slept On But The Wack " Lose Yourself Remixes" Get Like...4 Pages Long Of Kids Replies. * Sighs *

Not Bad Anyways, Return The Favour:
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