Spectator
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IP:
Firstly, I could relate to this piece.
I like how you begin welcoming us into your inner self to allow us to explore you, as I read on I felt like it was you taking the journey of self exploration, affirming who you are and how you feel- to yourself, not only to me, and then I became the by-stander witnessing your self discovery. Once having taken us on the journey, you send us on our way with some of the tools to perhaps search within ourselves for inner acceptance.
Nice flow, there were no lines that held me up. The kind of piece that makes it impossible to take something away from it once you have read it. Nice read.
Kudos~
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Great spirits often encounter violent opposition from mediocre minds.
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