iight

to tell the i got lost in this, no matter how many times i read it, its never very clear to me how your really feeling, or what your feeling. Try writing something purly from your emotions first, dont worry about anything about getting it out, dont think about rymes, form, flow, nothing, till its done, then take it go over it and then fix it up , just a suggestion

i can see more just wanting to be let out, so unleash it, dont be afraid

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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