Y'know at first I was thinking this was very Tupacish, then I read the word Eminem and I realized why.

Nevertheless this is still some good stuff. Personaly, I think it's highly concentional and reeks of basicnitivy. But I also think that everyone needs to write a peice like this, and in one form or another we all do.

I'm willing to bet this peice is your launching pad, all the other poetry and rap you write beyond this point needs to be an elevation of this in some way.

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.