Oh this is certainly poetry. Real deep emotional raw poetry. With a seriously deep message.

I think thats something that aint seen much often in poetry. I mean, everyone is trying to express themselves. I try and express myself, she trys to express herself. And it's all about ourselves, but not others. And at the end you tell others to do something, and you tell them not to join a gang.

And thats a good thing, because in expressing yourself you give a message to others. A message, that some people may honestly not realize.

And for that, I praise you.

~Shalom~

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.