Short, yet to the point - i liked this piece, last line was easily its highlight as i read it, good imagery and story telling shown here, the mixtape line was worded dope, and thats coming from a guy who's been here three years so i know what im talking about! The flow was there, could you a slight tweak, more multi's and internals would help you a lot, but all in all a decent drop, you have a lot of potential my man, i hope you use that wisely. .

Props!
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